Writing Task 2 feedback – How to improve a Band 6 score

Many candidates feel stuck at the band 6 or 6.5 level in their writing. This post gives feedback on the previous sample essay showing where the improvements need to be made to increase the band score.
Task Response Feedback

Coherence and Cohesion Feedback

Lexical Resource feedback

Grammatical Range and Accuracy Feedback

The most important feedback here is to plan, check and make sure you answer all of the question.